Some people believe that educational success depends on good teachers, while others believe that the attitude of the student is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Education is a vital role in our lives. However, there are predominantly two contrasting views where a section of society vehemently deems that academic performance relies on first-class professors to obtain high grades while others emphasize that the attitude of a student is crucial when it comes to achieving high scores in academics. In this essay, I will shed some light on both views and conclude my opinion.
Apparently, there are numerous reasons to withstand the society that considers that success in education comes with a better mentorship of teachers. A good teacher should always give regular homework to ensure whether children are grasping the concepts that had been taught in the lectures or not. As a result, professors can easily gauge the grasping power of students and tailor the lessons to suit each one of them. Apart from this, teachers can motivate pupils to work harder when they fall behind. Finally, better educators always guide his or her student in the right direction of their passion and growth in their professional careers. With all these points to be considered, a teacher plays a crucial role in helping students to get better grades in their academics.
On the other hand, a teacher cannot help a student who has no interest in learning because an educator can give only lectures in the class. Thus, it is the student responsible to ensure that he or she spent additional time learning the subjects which had been taught in schools at their homes. With this kind of learning and responsibility, a pupil will develop a good attitude to focus on getting good marks in the subjects. If a pupil is determined to learn and selfish about getting educational success, without any support he or she will pass the academic results with flying colors.
To conclude, in my profound viewpoint, while it is true that a teacher plays a crucial role in helping students to grasp concepts and achieve better grades, they cannot do anything more than that and only a pupil with a positive and determined attitude who is ready to work hard will evidently achieve education success without any hurdles.Therefore, it is evident that the academic success depend upon the student's attitude of learning and ensuring him or her to obtain higher grades at school.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...e education success without any hurdles.Therefore, it is evident that the academic succes...
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Line 7, column 408, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...at the academic success depend upon the students attitude of learning and ensuring him o...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, kind of, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98952879581 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7127543587 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523560209424 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.932991306 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.142857143 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23840334905 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768162366124 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444085616691 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147476088397 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234756899466 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Therefore
...e education success without any hurdles.Therefore, it is evident that the academic succes...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 408, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...at the academic success depend upon the students attitude of learning and ensuring him o...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, finally, first, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, apart from, kind of, as a result, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1906.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98952879581 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7127543587 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523560209424 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.932991306 49.4020404114 218% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.142857143 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23840334905 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768162366124 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444085616691 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147476088397 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234756899466 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.