A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In you letter-Thank him/her for inviting you-Describe how you felt about his/her family members-Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

Essay topics:

A friend had invited you for a meal at his/her place. Write a letter to your friend. In you letter
-Thank him/her for inviting you
-Describe how you felt about his/her family members
-Make suggestions about his/her visit to your place

Dear,
Kammy

I hope you will be quite well. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the magnificent dinner with you.

It was a great day at your house.I was delighted to taste toothsome food which was enriched with nutritional values. I could not come to come to know about your exceptional culinary skill if you had not invited.Apart from the food, your whole family is amiable.It did'nt seem that i was meeting them first time. I was rejoiced to met you all.

Moreover, you have an elegant house with marvelous interior. The infrastructure is fabulous.I want to thanks you once again for making my visit memorable.

Looking forward for your visit at my place in coming vacations.Please pass my regards to your family members.
I am waiting eagerly to know about you.

Warm wishes,
Hazal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear, Kammy I hope you will be quite well. ...
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Suggestion: I
...u. It was a great day at your house.I was delighted to taste toothsome food w...
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Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'come to'.
Suggestion: come to
...ed with nutritional values. I could not come to come to know about your exceptional culinary s...
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Line 6, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to know about your exceptional culinary skill if you had not invited.Apart from ...
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Line 6, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: Apart
... culinary skill if you had not invited.Apart from the food, your whole family is ami...
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Line 6, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: It
... the food, your whole family is amiable.It didnt seem that i was meeting them firs...
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Line 6, column 266, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...e food, your whole family is amiable.It didnt seem that i was meeting them first time...
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Line 6, column 282, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...le family is amiable.It didnt seem that i was meeting them first time. I was rejo...
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Line 8, column 93, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: I
...nterior. The infrastructure is fabulous.I want to thanks you once again for makin...
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Line 8, column 103, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'thank'.
Suggestion: thank
...he infrastructure is fabulous.I want to thanks you once again for making my visit memo...
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Line 10, column 64, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Please
...r visit at my place in coming vacations.Please pass my regards to your family members....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, moreover, so, well, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 682.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 139.0 206.0 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90647482014 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75636288602 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 127.690721649 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690647482014 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 206.1 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.710763422 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.2 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.7 4.34317383033 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289609950156 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111261314032 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569398205115 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164387692085 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0195455067331 0.0580467560999 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 70.7449484536 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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