A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
give contact details for when you are away
give instructions about how to care for your pet
describe other household duties
Dear Karen
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and best of spirit. I am writing to let you know some household duties and instructions to take care of my pet in my absence and you are agreed to stay at my home when I will be away.
As I already discussed with you that I have 4 days science conference in Vancouver. Therefore, I am leaving my home on 23rd July in the early morning. For your convenience, I will keep the key to the main door under the mat outside the backdoor so that you can take the keys and enter my home safely.
I want to bring your attention to my small puppy who is 9 months old. The puppy prefers to drink milk thrice a time in a day and food only once at noon. Moreover, he likes to play in the backyard with some toys in the evening. You should provide water to him as well at regular intervals and help him to take shower in this summer season.
Apart from that, I will be glad if you watered the plants on the top roof of my house. Also, keep the lights switch off when you are not at home.
Hearing from you back soon.
Regards
Preet
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...stay at my home when I will be away. As I already discussed with you that I hav...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.13615023474 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1306589896 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62441314554 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.8736169095 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4166666667 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197949585563 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057540808472 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0552233119266 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104350054994 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581752098345 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.44 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.