Dear Serena,
I am writing this letter to thank you to agreeing to take care of my house and my two dogs while I'm away on holiday. I have taken a local sim card and you can contact me at (+91-987654321) in case of any emergency. Additionally, you can also reach out to my neighbor if my phone is unavailable as she is always at home and aware of the dogs routine and habits.
In addition, I would like to explain in detail how you can take care of them. They need to be fed only two times a day and their bowl of water always need to be full as they might get dehydrated. Also, you can take them to the garden in the evening so that they do not mess the house. However, if any of them fall sick, do not panic, just dissolve the tablet, which is kept near their food, in water and give them to drink. Wait for half an hour for the tablet to take effect, if not then you can take them to the vet who is just across the street.
I would also like to request you to please water my plants daily. Could you also please collect the daily newspaper which would be dropped at the door step. I would like to read them once I'm back home. Please let me know what you need from Bali and I will get it for you while returning.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Your Friend,
Katie
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'dogs'' or 'dog's'?
Suggestion: dogs'; dog's
... she is always at home and aware of the dogs routine and habits. In addition, I w...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... also please collect the daily newspaper which would be dropped at the door step....
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...or step. I would like to read them once Im back home. Please let me know what you ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 254.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.06692913386 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04178937156 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55905511811 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7007551486 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.7857142857 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205295227548 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811115478289 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781184313268 0.0603063233224 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103065338013 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152497354467 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 87.05 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.03 8.71597938144 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.27 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.