You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbor.
Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter:
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbor to come
Dear Mary,
I am this letter to inform you that I have recently shifted in the flat next door. I'm a working in an accounting firm just down the street and so I moved here as it will be easy to commute to work. I recently graduated and this is my first time I will be staying on my own. Furthermore, I am planning to host a house warming party at my place over the weekend.
First let me explain in detail my plans for the party. Since, my guests will mostly be my close friends, family and members of this building, I'm planning an intimate gathering with dinner and some music. Also, there will be children so I'm inviting a magician over to keep them entertained. Additionally, I have planned some interactive and fun games for all age groups. Later during the night we can play our favorite songs and dance.
Lastly, I would be happy if you could join us as well. Since, all the neighbors are attending it will be a good platform to interact and know one another.
Looking forward to meeting you.
Your Faithfully,
Karen Fernandes
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...recently shifted in the flat next door. Im a working in an accounting firm just do...
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Line 3, column 253, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stay'
Suggestion: stay
...duated and this is my first time I will staying on my own. Furthermore, I am planning t...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 143, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...s, family and members of this building, Im planning an intimate gathering with din...
^^
Line 5, column 237, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... music. Also, there will be children so Im inviting a magician over to keep them e...
^^
Line 7, column 138, Rule ID: KNOW_NOW[4]
Message: Did you mean 'now'?
Suggestion: now
...will be a good platform to interact and know one another. Looking forward to meet...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, lastly, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50526315789 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49755559168 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678947368421 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.2470590332 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.8461538462 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169639481873 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586182019162 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481535297543 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0761608196119 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00711416872161 0.0580467560999 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.