A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday Write a letter to your friend In your letter give contact details for when you are away give instructions on how to take care of your pet describe the other household duties

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter:
-- give contact details for when you are away
-- give instructions on how to take care of your pet
-- describe the other household duties

Dear Jenny,

I just wanted to thank you for accepting my request to take care of my home and my furry friend when I will be away for a vacation.

You can reach out to these people mentioned on the list during my absence. I have appointed for a full time maid, cook and a gardener. For the complete information of these individuals, you can refer to the red diary.

Handle the rabbits with gentle care as they are very fragile. Feed them with hay grass, green vegetables and freshwater on all the days. Other than that interact and play with them for an hour at least without leaving them unattended.

Apart from looking after the domestic animals I would want you to perform some chores such as watering the plants daily, switching off the motor on time and cleaning the house whenever possible, also keep the windows closed during the evening time.

I am grateful to you for performing this sweet gesture in my hour of need and look forward to meeting you soon. Take good care of yourself.

With Love,
Elizabeth.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 99, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...ring my absence. I have appointed for a full time maid, cook and a gardener. For the comp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, apart from, at least, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 853.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66120218579 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33731631746 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.672131147541 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9621092479 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.5454545455 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09090909091 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15898541436 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0531896164427 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419715360594 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889562923936 0.12726935374 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435684330507 0.0580467560999 75% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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