You are studying a short course in another country. Your accommodation was arranged by the course provider. There is a major problem with accommodation.
Write a letter to the course provider.
- In your letter: say what the problem is
- describe the accommodation you thought you were getting
- ask the provider to solve the problem
Dear Mr. Daniel,
I had enrolled for a crash course in your nation where, the housing was arranged for me by one of your employees which has issues due to its blocked drainage.
Because of the continuous leaking of wastewater flowing into my living room. I end up spending too much of my precious time in cleaning rather than studying. hence I am unable to focus on my studies.
My expectations were different from what you have actually provided me with. I was promised a single room with all the basic facilities with certain level of comfort, a single cot and an attached bathroom with a proper plumping system.
I request you to change my current room and provide me with a better option by the earliest if not please refund this month’s rent into my account if not I will have to take a serious action regarding the same.
I look forward to hearing a positive response from your end. I hope you will resolve the matter soon and I will not be forced to take any further action against you.
Yours Sincerely,
Elizabeth Manickam.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. Daniel, I had enrolled for a crash course in you...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...issues due to its blocked drainage. Because of the continuous leaking of wastewater...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hence
... time in cleaning rather than studying. hence I am unable to focus on my studies. ...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: hence,
... time in cleaning rather than studying. hence I am unable to focus on my studies. ...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 237, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...bathroom with a proper plumping system. I request you to change my current room ...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a serious action regarding the same. I look forward to hearing a positive resp...
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Line 11, column 62, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ring a positive response from your end. I hope you will resolve the matter soon a...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, hence, if, look, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 870.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67741935484 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49555043964 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677419354839 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.1962411352 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159913566605 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555084530034 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472228340294 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771814410216 0.12726935374 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521501982173 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.