A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties
Dear Ben,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing to thank you for looking after my house and my pet snowy and additionally provide some instructions which will make your stay comfortable while I am away on a holiday. Let me explain the details.
To elucidate I will be carrying my mobile phone to Bali and would be reachable on Viber or WhatsApp on the same number. I prefer texting rather than calls. Coming to snowy, I have kept his food items like pedigree, milk and water bowls in the cabin which is in the balcony area. You can serve him pedigree and milk twice a day additionally if he still feels hungry serve him some boiled chicken which is kept in the freezer. Don’t worry about taking snowy out as Smith will come every day and take him for morning and evening walks.
Lastly, there is some technical issue with the microwave oven and I have asked a local technician to visit and fix the problem. I will share your contact details with him and he will coordinate with you.
I hope you have a pleasant stay and do text me in the case of an emergency.
Best regards
Saad
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, lastly, look, so, still, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43564356436 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32053102306 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643564356436 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4047506579 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8333333333 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.33333333333 4.34317383033 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172557821717 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497163631645 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078925713293 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109526985203 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0902705697365 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.