A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter⦁give contact details for when you are away⦁give instructions about how to care for your pet⦁describe other household duties

Essay topics:

A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday.

Write a letter to your friend. In your letter

⦁ give contact details for when you are away

⦁ give instructions about how to care for your pet

⦁ describe other household duties

Dear Jack,

I hope you’re doing well.

i’d like to thank you one more time that you politely agreed to look after my house. I really appreciate it.

there are few things i’d like you to do while I’m out of my home:

1. I left my house in a hurry so I don’t remember if I turned off all lights. please make sure there are no working luminaries.

2. please feed my cat at least twice a day and don’t forget to fill it’s dish of fresh water.

3. my plants are need to be poured once a day. it’s very important, because there are a lot of sun in this summer season. They could possibly fade.

4. Every time you left my house please check if you close the door properly and switched on the security system.

please call or message me any time you have a question. Just in case you lost my number, it’s +998977474069.

See you soon. Bye.

Votes
Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ack, I hope you're doing well. i'd like to thank you one more time...
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... I hope you're doing well. i'd like to thank you one more time that ...
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Suggestion:
...ter my house. I really appreciate it. there are few things i'd like you t...
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Suggestion: Please
...;t remember if I turned off all lights. please make sure there are no working luminari...
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Suggestion: could
... lot of sun in this summer season. They could possibly fade. 4. Every time you left my hous...
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... and switched on the security system. please call or message me any time you have a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, well, while, at least

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50920245399 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42148723651 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699386503067 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6591510477 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 52.5 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.6428571429 16.8248392259 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0954399297039 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0380376661533 0.0766984524023 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412215670169 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0513960895742 0.12726935374 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404231963723 0.0580467560999 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.6 8.37731958763 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.69 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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