Dear John,
I hope you are doing great!
I am going to Australia with my partner for the vacation next week and I will back home in three weeks, which is the information that I told you before.
During my holiday time, please take care my house and dog, also I am able to response email as soon as I can because I bought the extra data package already. Please send your request to my personal email address joe@joe.com. The major tasks for the house is to water my indoor plants every day, especially peace lily, that is my birthday present from my wife. Besides, just to check the front door and backyard twice a week it will be fine.
Our dog is getting old so no need too much walk for him. Regular dog food is enough, which I still have some in the garage shelf that is the space I showed to you last time.
Thanks for the help in advance and I will bring some local gifts for you and your family.
Kind regards,
Joe
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28651685393 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03824219824 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0557630732 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7777777778 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11111111111 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152273736881 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0589847941637 0.0766984524023 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605792693378 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944655531941 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595420735357 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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