Dear Sara,
I'm happy to have a friend like you for accepting my request to look after my doggie and home . In this letter I am gone give you some tips that can help you while feeding and taking care of my snoopy and work u can do.
Firstly you can call me anytime you want but one thing I will mail you my american mobile number to you once I reach there at present I am in Plane. You can contact me through mail-id because, you know I will checking mails frequently .
Daily you can text me through internet app skype and imo also .
Secondly coming to snoopy take it to the morning walk and there it will do potti and piss and there after bring it to home and just feed a pedigree at morning followed by warm bath and later take it to lawn to make it warm .later place snoopy at its shelter .
Now you please water the plants and grass in the lawn in the evening and instruct the watchman to wash the car daily .
I will be so thankful to you until the end of my life for your help that your doing at present .
yours's lovingly,
Balu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sara, Im happy to have a frien...
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Line 4, column 17, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...Sara, Im happy to have a friend like you for acc...
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Line 4, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...request to look after my doggie and home . In this letter I am gone give you some ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... care of my snoopy and work u can do. Firstly you can call me any...
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Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ut one thing I will mail you my american mobile number to you once I reach there ...
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Line 6, column 224, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'check'
Suggestion: check
...hrough mail-id because, you know I will checking mails frequently . Daily you can text...
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Line 6, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ou know I will checking mails frequently . Daily you can text me through interne...
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Line 7, column 58, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...t me through internet app skype and imo also . Secondly coming to sn...
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Line 7, column 62, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... through internet app skype and imo also . Secondly coming to snoo...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h internet app skype and imo also . Secondly coming to snoopy take it to the...
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Line 9, column 107, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...and there it will do potti and piss and there after bring it to home and just feed a pedigr...
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Line 9, column 235, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...nd later take it to lawn to make it warm .later place snoopy at its shelter . ...
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Line 9, column 270, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... warm .later place snoopy at its shelter . Now you please wa...
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Line 9, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rm .later place snoopy at its shelter . Now you please water the p...
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Line 11, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and grass in the lawn in the evening and instruct the watchman to wash the car da...
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Line 11, column 132, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...truct the watchman to wash the car daily . I will be so than...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the watchman to wash the car daily . I will be so thankful t...
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Line 13, column 91, Rule ID: YOUR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you're' or 'you are'?
Suggestion: you're; you are
...l the end of my life for your help that your doing at present . yourss lovingl...
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Line 13, column 112, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...for your help that your doing at present . yourss lovingly, Balu ...
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Line 13, column 113, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...or your help that your doing at present . yourss lovingly, Balu ...
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Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur help that your doing at present . yourss lovingly, Balu ...
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Line 15, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yourss
...help that your doing at present . yourss lovingly, Balu ...
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Line 16, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t present . yourss lovingly, Balu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 849.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.16176470588 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94311973015 2.54303337028 76% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593137254902 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.3165950987 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3333333333 76.5299724578 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 4.34317383033 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 23.0 2.54639175258 903% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226101801095 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.091895805474 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705266316826 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0948807205132 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865272716773 0.0580467560999 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.14 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.