A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter
• give contact details for when you are away
• give instructions about how to care for your pet
• describe other household duties.
Dear Sam,
I trust you must be doing well. I am glad to hear that you are staying in my house and look after my pet as well as house when I am going outside for the vacations.
As you are my childhood friend, so you know every contact detail of mine. However, for safety reason, I will memorize you with the information again. My cell phone number you know but in case it is unavailable then contact my office at 9988776644 or leave message at my or office email. Besides this I am leaving the address of my workplace in a sticky note at the kitchen cabinet for your convenience.
Apart from this, firstly, I want to guide you about some instructions that you follow while providing care to my pet. Use a special medicated shampoo to wash the dog, keep a blanket when he is going to sleep and take out for evening walk if possible. Moreover, every fortnight we have a appointment with vetenary doctor as my pet fell sick last month. So be careful about all the schedule. Secondly, in my house water the backyard garden daily, broom the house whenever necessary and lastly do not forget to check the mail box on weekends.
I hope you have no issues regarding looking after my house and pet. Meet you soon after the holidays.
Best regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Besides,
...or leave message at my or office email. Besides this I am leaving the address of my wor...
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Line 7, column 286, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ible. Moreover, every fortnight we have a appointment with vetenary doctor as my ...
^
Line 11, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oon after the holidays. Best regards,
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, well, while, apart from, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48471615721 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41213315907 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64192139738 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.7845218055 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6153846154 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.6153846154 4.34317383033 267% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261558856725 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897985664326 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600582808198 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166615756265 0.12726935374 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0106046023897 0.0580467560999 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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