A friend has agreed to stay in your apartment and look after it while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-give information about your flat
-provide any important instructions
-say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Dear Ricky,
First of all, thank you so much for agreeing to look after my apartment during my absence. And, I hope you are doing well. I’m writing to give quick information about my address, contact information for any problems and some duties which require to be taken care of while I’m away.
I live on the 14th floor, Tower-1, Rockwood society and my house no - 1401. It is a three-bedroom apartment with a small servant room. You’ll find all the amenities in the society such as an indoor and outdoor sports complex, swimming pool, and a beautiful park to enjoy the breathtaking views. Also, you need to come by car to my place and I'll suggest you to take the ring road from your street to reach my home because you might find traffic congestion in the town.
Moreover, please ensure to maintain a serene environment in the neighborhood as there are none bachelors living excluding me in the building. Plus, they have kept a board that strictly instructs not to make noises after 11 PM in the night. Also, please make sure you pick the milk bottle and newspapers daily in the morning, or else they would be left kept on the entrance.
Lastly, I just to update you that if you face any issues while living at my residence during the time of my vacation. You can always drop a WhatsApp message or contact me on 837292393. I’ll be available 24/7 to revert from these two mediums of communication. Once again, thank you for your help to guard my home.
I look forward to seeing you on my return
Regards,
Shwatank
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- Television dominates the free time of too many people It can make people lazy and prevent them from socialising with others Do you agree or disagree 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y absence And I hope you are doing well Im writing to give quick information about...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...which require to be taken care of while Im away I live on the 14th floor Tower1...
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Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: NOW[3]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...or Tower1 Rockwood society and my house no is 1401 It is a threebedroom apartment ...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You'll
...oom apartment with a small servant room Youll find all the amenities in the society s...
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Line 5, column 315, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...aking views of the greenery surroundings Moreover please ensure to maintain a ser...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... views of the greenery surroundings Moreover please ensure to maintain a serene envi...
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Line 7, column 236, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to make noises after 11 PM in the night Finally I just to remind you that if you...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Finally,
...ake noises after 11 PM in the night Finally I just to remind you that if you face a...
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Line 9, column 173, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...sApp message or contact me on 837292393 Ill be available 247 to revert from these t...
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Line 9, column 278, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ation Once again thank you for your help I look forward to seeing you on my retur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, mind you, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66509433962 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58694916471 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669811320755 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 212.0 16.3608247423 1296% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 989.0 76.5299724578 1292% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 212.0 16.8248392259 1260% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 84.0 4.34317383033 1934% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189152643161 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189152643161 0.0766984524023 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0880812546847 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694601829544 0.0580467560999 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 106.6 8.37731958763 1272% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -126.78 70.7449484536 -179% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 83.6 7.45979381443 1121% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.29 8.71597938144 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 16.98 7.59969072165 223% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 86.8 8.54432989691 1016% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 87.0 8.15463917526 1067% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.