Dear Ricky,
First of all, thank you so much for agreeing to look after my apartment during my absence. And, I hope you are doing well. I’m writing to give quick information about my address, contact information for any problems and some duties which require to be taken care of while I’m away.
I live on the 14th floor, Tower-1, Rockwood society and my house no - 1401. It is a three-bedroom apartment with a small servant room. You’ll find all the amenities in the society such as an indoor and outdoor sports complex, swimming pool, and a beautiful park to enjoy the breathtaking views. Also, you need to come by car to my place and I'll suggest you take the ring road from your street to reach my home because you might find traffic congestion in the town.
Moreover, please ensure to maintain a serene environment in the neighborhood as none bachelors are living excluding me in the building. Plus, they have kept a board that strictly instructs not to make noises after 11 PM in the night. Also, please make sure you pick the milk bottle and newspapers daily in the morning, or else they would be left kept at the entrance.
Lastly, I just to update you that if you face any issues while living at my residence during the time of my vacation. You can always drop a WhatsApp message or contact me on 837292393. I’ll be available 24/7 to revert from these two mediums of communication. Once again, thank you for your help to guard my home.
I look forward to seeing you on my return
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y absence And I hope you are doing well Im writing to give quick information about...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...which require to be taken care of while Im away I live on the 14th floor Tower1...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Tower1 Rockwood society and my house no 1401 It is a threebedroom apartment with...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: You'll
...oom apartment with a small servant room Youll find all the amenities in the society s...
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Line 5, column 330, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...you need to come by car to my place and Ill suggest you take the ring road from you...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
... find traffic congestion in the town Moreover please ensure to maintain a serene envi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... they would be left kept at the entrance Lastly I just to update you that if you ...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...sApp message or contact me on 837292393 Ill be available 247 to revert from these t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thank you for your help to guard my home I look forward to seeing you on my retur...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, lastly, look, moreover, so, well, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1217.0 937.175257732 130% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47426470588 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38985010877 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632352941176 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 290.88556701 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 272.0 16.3608247423 1663% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1217.0 76.5299724578 1590% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 272.0 16.8248392259 1617% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 79.0 4.34317383033 1819% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17934846253 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17934846253 0.0766984524023 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0962755284096 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0565716471912 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 135.6 8.37731958763 1619% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -187.68 70.7449484536 -265% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 107.0 7.45979381443 1434% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.13 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 19.74 7.59969072165 260% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 54.0 8.62886597938 626% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 110.8 8.54432989691 1297% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 54.0 8.15463917526 662% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.