A friend has agreed to stay in your apartment and look after it while you are away. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
-give information about your flat
-provide any important instructions
-say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Dear Lindsay,
First of all, I would like to thank you to look after my apartment while I'm out of town. However, I just want to give you some information while you are guarding my home.
Since you never got a chance to visit my apartment, let me provide you the address of my home. I live in Derwala Nagar society which is in the north zone of our city. My house number is 33/A first floor, where A stands as a block number of my society. It will be a twenty-minute drive from your home to reach my place. Please take a national highway one route which will be easier and convenient to come to my place and you'll not face any traffic congestion problems.
Moreover, during my absence, please ensure to keep doors and windows lock before sleeping because you'll be safely secure while guarding my home. Apart from this, please do not forget to pick up newspapers and a bottle of milk every morning from the front door. Also, I have prepared a grilled cheese sandwich and a fruit punch for you to eat once you'll arrive at my home.
I've dropped the keys to my neighbor who is living on the ground floor. I've informed them that you'll be staying in my apartment in my absence to guard my home. Besides, if you'll face any problems such as reaching to my place, trouble while getting a key, using kitchen or any other equipment at my place, please give me a call on my mobile phone. I'll be happy to walk you through all the problems. After coming back, I'll take you out for a dinner at your favorite Chinese restaurant.
Looking forward to seeing you on my return.
Regards,
Shwatank
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...nk you to look after my apartment while Im out of town. However, I just want to gi...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'A stand' or simply 'stands'?
Suggestion: A stand; Stands
...house number is 33/A first floor, where A stands as a block number of my society. It wil...
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Suggestion: you'll
... and convenient to come to my place and youll not face any traffic congestion problem...
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Suggestion: you'll
...nd windows lock before sleeping because youll be safely secure while guarding my home...
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Suggestion: you'll
...h and a fruit punch for you to eat once youll arrive at my home. Ive dropped the ...
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...o eat once youll arrive at my home. Ive dropped the keys to my neighbor who is ...
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...hbor who is living on the ground floor. Ive informed them that youll be staying in ...
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...he ground floor. Ive informed them that youll be staying in my apartment in my absenc...
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Suggestion: you'll
...y absence to guard my home. Besides, if youll face any problems such as reaching to m...
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Line 9, column 347, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ease give me a call on my mobile phone. Ill be happy to walk you through all the pr...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...gh all the problems. After coming back, Ill take you out for a dinner at your favor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, look, moreover, so, while, apart from, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 937.175257732 139% => OK
No of words: 294.0 206.0 143% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42857142857 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28421557604 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 127.690721649 138% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 290.88556701 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0000865051 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.375 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.375 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9375 4.34317383033 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129233238551 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481961216108 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0419307330865 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872141594991 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400822869284 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.