A friend has written a letter to you informing about his or her plan to visit your country/city.
Write a letter to him/ her. In your letter, write:
• what he or she can do in your country/city
• advise him about the place he could stay at
• suggest him/her what to pack and bring while coming to travel to your country/city
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you? Hope you are having a joyous time. I received your letter and was very excited to know that you are visiting my city Delhi. I can’t wait to meet you soon.
I guess this is your first visit to Delhi, capital of India and I am sure you will have a lot of fun here. There are numerous historical tourist attractions as well as pilgrimages which are very famous such as The Red Fort, Qutub Minar, Humayun Tomb, ISKON Temple, Gurudwara Bangla Sahib and many more. I am certain that not only you will love the architectural beauty but will also get the opportunity to learn about the events of glory and struggle of the historical leaders. Moreover, you will enjoy the scrumptious and succulent cuisines in Delhi especially the street food which is very famous in Delhi.
I would like you to stay with me at my place so Inform me about your time schedule of your flight as I will be there to receive you at the airport. We will enjoy together going shopping, visiting the architectural monuments, and enjoying the delicious food.
I would recommend you that since you are visiting Delhi during the summers, so kindly keep cotton clothes as during the afternoons the heat is unbearable. Do not forget to camera to capture the beauty of the city as well as the medicines you need.
Looking forward to meet you soon, Take care
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
.... I can't wait to meet you soon. I guess this is your first visit to Delhi...
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Line 7, column 259, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ments, and enjoying the delicious food. I would recommend you that since you are...
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Line 11, column 17, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to meeting'.
Suggestion: to meeting
...e medicines you need. Looking forward to meet you soon, Take care With love, Pra...
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Line 11, column 44, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...king forward to meet you soon, Take care With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Line 15, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake care With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, may, moreover, so, well, i guess, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1156.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66129032258 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45221965645 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588709677419 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3608881193 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9230769231 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.92307692308 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164803770751 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604008483785 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616888356372 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960535249202 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584848247882 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.