Some people say that excessive noise should be a criminal offence, while others say they should be free to make noise without limitation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Certain individuals have this notion that producing too much noise is a criminal activity, whereas others believe their should be no boundation on the amount of noise made. This essay agrees that some laws and policies should be put in place specifying the amount of noise created so that it does not affect societ and community. This essay will discuss both point of views.
Many individuals believe that all people live in a democratic country where thay have the freedom to do anything or to behave in anyway and their should be no law imposed on their freedom. They believe that people have the right to play loud music or DJ during their parties and functions and no one should stop them. To exemplify, in sporting events, such as football, the decibels are at their highest peak or celebrations like birthday parties at home where children shout on the top of their voice to make their presence felt.
However, several individuals have this opinion that police deparment should impose some laws on the amount of noise made as too much noise will not only cause health issues such as hearing problems, cardiovascular issues, migrane and head aches, but it will also affect the peace and harmony of other people living nearby. Despite of this if anyone makes noise should be heavily penalised and should even be put behind bars if necesssry. To elucidate, according to the law in Delhi any sort of loud DJ music or any other means of noise is not allowed to be created after 12 PM and if someone breaks the rule they are levied with heavy fines.
To conclude, while people should be given the freedom to produce noise with no limitatioon, some still feel that some laws shouls be in place for people so that they limit their noise as too much noise can cause many problems for people in the locality. Nevertheless, in my opinion, i vehemently agree that too much noise is harmful for society and regulations should be made on the amount of noise produced
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...live in a democratic country where thay have the freedom to do anything or to behave...
^^^^
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
...the freedom to do anything or to behave in anyway and their should be no law imposed on t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oud music or DJ during their parties and functions and no one should stop them. T...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, whereas, while, as to, sort of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70930232558 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37115234426 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514534883721 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9525222698 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.272727273 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2727272727 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351480800134 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152728210878 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858498933053 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234614924498 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895289730586 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 82, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (thay) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...live in a democratic country where thay have the freedom to do anything or to behave...
^^^^
Line 2, column 127, Rule ID: IN_ANYWAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'in any way'?
Suggestion: in any way
...the freedom to do anything or to behave in anyway and their should be no law imposed on t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oud music or DJ during their parties and functions and no one should stop them. T...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, whereas, while, as to, sort of, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70930232558 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37115234426 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514534883721 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.9525222698 49.4020404114 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 147.272727273 106.682146367 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.2727272727 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351480800134 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152728210878 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0858498933053 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.234614924498 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895289730586 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.