: A friend has written to you asking for your advice about a problem at work. You have had a similar problem at work. You have had a similar problem in the past. Write a reply to your friend. In your letter; tell your friend you understand the problem, explain what happened to you in the past suggest possible solutions to the problem
Dear Ria,
This letter is in reply to your letter which I have received two days before. While going through your letter, I could easily connect with your difficulty and feel bad for the same.
If I reiterate the situation which I had was no lesser than yours. One of my seniors was in good terms with our boss. He took the advantage of his relation and pressurized me for long hours work. He gave me extra assignments for which I used to stay back after office hours. My family life as well as my health alarmed to solve this issue at the earliest.
Boldly I took this matter to my boss and fortunately I could relieve myself. I recommend you to talk to your management so that they can take necessary steps and resolve your problem.
I hope my handful of advice will relieve you from this situation.
Yours Affectionately,
Rio
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...r difficulty and feel bad for the same. If I reiterate the situation which I had w...
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Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...f I reiterate the situation which I had was no lesser than yours. One of my seniors...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 684.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46695613584 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 127.690721649 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.690789473684 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6394191884 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.1818181818 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260037886353 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863435638595 0.0766984524023 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825753920131 0.0603063233224 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149652362468 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0634511098262 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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