Some people believe that it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, individuals use different scenarios to express their love and care towards their near ones. Some demographics think that giving gifts and presents are the best way to show care for them; however, other ways better ways are available to express their loves as per some other people. This essay will converse about both views.
Gifts help to stay positive in our life. We can keep them as the tokens of remembrance of wonderful days of our life such as birthday, marriage anniversaries and many more. For instance, if someone wishes us on these days with gifts, then we collect beautiful moments of the special day. These moments play a significant role to stay motivated in life. We feel being loved. Moreover, when we saw them in a hard time then, we feel encouraged to face any difficulty in life.
On the flip side, showing respect and financial help are also considered as the other ways to show our love to friends and family. If we talk respectfully to our elders, then feel more respected. Not only sweet talk helps to keep our relationship for a long life but also made it stronger day by day. Along with this, everyone's life depends on money. Hence, if we help our friends or family member in their difficult time, then they remember us for their entire.
In conclusion, we keep gifts as symbols of love and special occasions to survive positively and financial assistance along with sweet talk help to strengthen our relationship and trust. In my opinion, both gifts and financial aid are the best ways to show love and care towards our family members and friends.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77898550725 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50840584316 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.6670991749 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.4375 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253876906497 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795774062834 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0987324810932 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162792103078 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856199619045 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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