A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
thank him for the invitation
mention why you can not attend the birthday party
offer to meet him some other day
Dear Jack,
Hope you are safe and sound!
How're your family? I am so glad, you invite me on a birthday party of your daughter. I feel jubilant, when I open an invitation letter. I wish her a very happy birthday and thank you for your invitation.
Actually, On that day my brother came from Canada after five years, So I will have to go to airport to receive him, so I cannot attend this party function. Along with this, a family function will going organised by my family for his warm welcome.
Anyway, on 26th, September, I will come at your town to attend conference relates to my new marketing strategies. If you free, then I would like to meet you and your family. Not only my family will come on that day, but also our best friend Kamal will also come to accompany me. After that, we have decided to spend some time at new opened five-star hotel at there. If you and your family come, then this moment will be adorable for us.
Looking forward to hearing from you positively,
With love,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...lant, when I open an invitation letter. I wish her a very happy birthday and than...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'go'
Suggestion: go
...Along with this, a family function will going organised by my family for his warm wel...
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Line 9, column 326, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...that, we have decided to spend some time at new opened five-star hotel at there. ...
^^
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... this moment will be adorable for us. Looking forward to hearing from you posi...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, anyway, but, if, look, so, then, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 836.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49462365591 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27105836411 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.409089899 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.6666666667 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233176581785 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0963442430222 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688557171724 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128651597233 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947376983151 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.