A friend you made while you studying abroad has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in a local company that might be suitable for him/her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves, say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her, explain how to apply for the job
Dear Mike,
How have you been? it has been a long time since we last met.I have received your letter yesterday asking for help in finding a suitable job opportunity in Singapore.
The timing of your letter is perfect as there is a suitable job opportunity in one of the satellite services company. The role is for the Senior Sales Engineer and involves regional support to the customers based in South East Asia. To elucidate the role involves technical and commercial support on turnkey projects which includes not only preparing proposals but also doing network design and demonstrations. I believe you are a right fit for this role as you have a strong experience in proposal preparation and solution design additionally you understand the dynamics of the satellite market and would be a great value add to the local team based in Singapore to help generate more business transactions.
Hence I recommend you to apply on the company website as soon as possible additionally you can send your résumé to me so that I can share it with the hiring manager to help increase the chances of getting an interview.
I look forward to your immediate response.
Warm wishes
Ben
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, How have you been? it has been a long ti...
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Line 2, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
Dear Mike, How have you been? it has been a long time since we last met....
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Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... has been a long time since we last met.I have received your letter yesterday ask...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...enerate more business transactions. Hence I recommend you to apply on the company...
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Line 6, column 220, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...se the chances of getting an interview. I look forward to your immediate respons...
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Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o your immediate response. Warm wishes Ben
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.915 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79960265038 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 318.6 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.5744480463 44.8134815571 195% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.352916689807 0.216113520407 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120083275519 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872343262318 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195443557679 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769518319354 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 8.37731958763 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 7.59969072165 117% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.