You have recently moved to a different house Write a letter to a friend In your letter 1 explain why you have moved 2 describe the new house 3 Invite your friend to come and visit

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You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to a friend.
In your letter
1) explain why you have moved.
2) describe the new house.
3) Invite your friend to come and visit.

Dear Ben,
How have you been? It has been a long time since we last met. I am writing in reference to inform you that I have recently moved to a new apartment. Let me elucidate further.

The reason for the movement is that the previous house was located far away from my office and lacked basic amenities like parking, gymnasium and swimming pool. To elucidate further the new apartment is spacious and has three rooms, two bathrooms and a living room. It is located in the suburbs of the city much nearer to my office. Now the hassles of driving to and from my office are over which used to result in fatigue thus I would be able to spend some quality time on my leisure activities like reading and sports.

Why you don’t pay us a visit on Saturday? I believe it will be a good opportunity to explore our new house and locality.
I look forward to your response
Warm Wishes
Ben

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, thus

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 733.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44242424242 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38767881027 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.672727272727 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 237.6 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3101126814 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.6363636364 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162225364111 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0644708291253 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887694861038 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11028789596 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767865300686 0.0580467560999 132% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.88 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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