A friend you made while you were studying aboard has written to ask you for help in finding a job in your country. You have heard about a job in local company that might be suitable for him/ her.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
Tell your friend about the job and what sort of work it involves
Say why you think the job would be suitable for him/her
Explain how to apply for the job
Dear…,
I am writing a letter base on our previous conversation about finding a job. Last week I received an email from the website that I had filled a form for finding job when I was an unemployment. The email was about local company which it recruit a data developer. It is a nine-to-five job and needs related experience and major. In addition, you can benefit from several perks like health insurance, annual raising and free accommodation for people who do not live in this country.
Since you have strong credential and you worked as a developer in your country, you are more likely to employ. Moreover, you are a good team player and have excellent interpersonal skills that it can be beneficial for this job.
I would like to mention that you can upload your CV in company’s website, after that their representative will call you. Please do not hesitate and contact me whenever you face any problem. I hope you find it useful.
Best regard,
bahare
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 237, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'recruits'?
Suggestion: recruits
... email was about local company which it recruit a data developer. It is a nine-to-five ...
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Line 2, column 298, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "needs related" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'relating' or 'to be related'.
Suggestion: relating; to be related
...per. It is a nine-to-five job and needs related experience and major. In addition, you ...
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Line 4, column 217, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Best'.
Suggestion: The Best
...any problem. I hope you find it useful. Best regard, bahare
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7619047619 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78378036249 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.684523809524 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 252.9 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3780154296 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.7272727273 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.27272727273 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388288248225 0.216113520407 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129705984468 0.0766984524023 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819871978672 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264809196653 0.12726935374 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601421687979 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.