Dear Rakesh,
I am glad that you finally reached out to me. I hope you are having a great time in London. I miss my college days and being with you. I did receive your message about finding a job in my country and I have been looking for the same ever since I heard about it. You know what, finally I heard a sweet voice from my cousin. There is a work available in her office.
The job is probably like what you used to do before. However, this time it is permanent though. The vacancy I found was need of IT developer who has some skills in both web design and coding. The day to day responsibilities in this job are to develop a web pages, and deploy them in production whenever it deems necessary. I do believe you have reasonable experience in IT sector, and I am pretty sure you can cope up with any new task if they been assigned to you.
To apply to this job, please register in the company website (ITC Infotech) and look for the career opportunities page. You can see the job posting number #13232 and post your latest resume or portfolio against to it. You can provide the reference details of my cousin and her employee ID is #560772. As you are not living in the country they may ask you join the virtual interview. If everything went well, you will be receiving all the paper work which is needed to file for the work visa.
Regards
Sudheerkumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 136, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...iss my college days and being with you. I did receive your message about finding ...
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Line 4, column 300, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... cousin and her employee ID is #560772. As you are not living in the country they ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, may, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1106.0 937.175257732 118% => OK
No of words: 258.0 206.0 125% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28682170543 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39842004762 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 127.690721649 125% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616279069767 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.912523478 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.125 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.413561976089 0.216113520407 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116807993304 0.0766984524023 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765777953425 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28782152783 0.12726935374 226% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641321380646 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.