A friend you made while you were studying abroad has written to ask for your help in finding a job in your country, you have heard about a job in local company that might be suitable for him/her
tell you friend about a job and what sort of work it involves
say why you think the job would be suitable for him
explain how to apply for a job
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you hale and hearty. I am very excited to know that you are looking for opportunities to work in my country. I always cherish the time we spent together in London when we were studying MBA; we made some good memories and long lasting friendship. As far as your job hunt is concerned, I am glad to tell you that I am aware of a vacancy of project manager in a renounced telecom company here. I am working with the same organization in the capacity of financial analyst.
Let me elaborate some core responsibilities of the position. Project management job description majorly includes working on different projects from scratch to end product creation. Working with cross functional teams, making of project implementation plans and securing business case approvals. I am convinced that you are an appropriate resource for this job as you did Project Management Professional (PMP) certification other than MBA degree which gives an edge over other candidates; academically. Additionally you have working experience of 3 years in same domain which is an added advantage.
Please apply online on our company’s website, click on the career section and apply for this post. Also, please send a scan copy of your resume to me so I can forward it to relevant HR personnel. I wish you all the luck for this job and interview process. Looking forward to work with you.
Yours Truly,
Lene
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you hale and hear...
^^^
Line 3, column 501, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...ge over other candidates; academically. Additionally you have working experience of 3 years ...
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Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...forward to work with you. Yours Truly, Lene
^^^
Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to work with you. Yours Truly, Lene
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1183.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 240.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92916666667 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9647202182 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645833333333 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4718472122 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.2 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305917585126 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.099195244925 0.0766984524023 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0709420205051 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202641832902 0.12726935374 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023270115382 0.0580467560999 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.