Dear John,
It was so nice to receive your correspondence after a long time. I still remember the help that you had extended during the college time in your country.
I am writing to let you know about a potential job opening at a local game design company that might be of interest to you. The company is currently recruiting for a staff software engineer position to work on the next generation game design engine. The job responsibilities include designing a new software engineer for a cloud application, supporting field engineers in troubleshooting customer reported bugs and providing technical support to the application engineers.
This would be an apt opportunity for you as you are currently working in a similar domain and share the similar skillset and job responsibilities as above. I also vividly remember that you had developed multiple games in the past and this has been your life long passion, to build new games.
If you are interested, you can either apply on the company website ( www.newgame.com/apply) by registering your interest or send me the up to date resume to be submitted at the company office.
I look forward to hearing back from you.
Yours,
Vikas Gupta
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... can either apply on the company website www.newgame.com/apply by registering you...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, still, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07035175879 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.17418535062 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643216080402 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 319.5 290.88556701 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0953409176 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.9 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.375508621095 0.216113520407 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132709270997 0.0766984524023 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0944877481694 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185092617961 0.12726935374 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491486476437 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.