A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear John,
I received your letter and good to hear that you are doing well. I accepted your invitation and I am planning to visit your hometown next week. Thank you for the invitation.Moreover,I have some queries regarding this trip. Please do provide me the information related to them.
Firstly, I want to know about special Indian things that your family likes, because I want to give them a present on my very first meet . It would be great help to me , if you will tell me their preferences.
Since , its my first visit to NewYork and I am not familarize with its weather conditions, so kindly inform me about the weather , so that I can pack my bag accordingly .
However, I am vegetarian and have some food allergies, so please confirm me about the food you will cook for me. Also, tell me about the availability of Indian food in your hometown in the close vicinity, so that I can eat Indian cuisines there.
I am eagerly waiting for your response.
Best regards,
Nancy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 119, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ur invitation and I am planning to visit your hometown next week. Thank you for t...
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Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Moreover
...next week. Thank you for the invitation.Moreover,I have some queries regarding this trip...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
...k. Thank you for the invitation.Moreover,I have some queries regarding this trip. ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to them. Firstly, I want to know about special Indian things that your family l...
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Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ive them a present on my very first meet . It would be great help to me , if you w...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...irst meet . It would be great help to me , if you will tell me their preferences. ...
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Line 4, column 6, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...u will tell me their preferences. Since , its my first visit to NewYork and I am ...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ill tell me their preferences. Since , its my first visit to NewYork and I am not ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...s, so kindly inform me about the weather , so that I can pack my bag accordingly ....
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... , so that I can pack my bag accordingly . However, I am vegetarian and have some...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61714285714 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76443461949 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.617142857143 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2086997668 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.4545454545 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203224652796 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081935980484 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553549815764 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114582717444 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740378307837 0.0580467560999 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.