A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
You do NOT need to write any address.
You should write at least 150 words
Dear Karan,
It's so great to hear from you! Thanks for your invitation to come visit you to Toronto this fall.
I would be delighted if you could suggest me few gift options for your parents as I was planning to give them something special. Initially, I was thinking to buy a lovely Indian dress for your mother and traditional shoes for your father. Do you think they would like it?
Also, I wanted to ask you if there are any interesting sight-seeing options in Toronto or any activities as such. Plus, I've checked the weather forecast, please advise me as to what apparels should I carry? I want to follow the current trend there and gel with the crowd.
Another thing is that I want to try everything to eat there as you know that I'm a food buff. From authentic street food to luxurious five star dishes; I want to try it all and I want you to accompany me everywhere because I'm only coming for a week's time.
Looking forward to seeing you soon
Warmest regards,
Rahul.
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| 2024-01-02 | mehjabin | 73 | view |
| 2022-01-14 | manu_kaur113 | 73 | view |
| 2022-01-06 | shadow1222 | 73 | view |
| 2021-07-02 | SKN | 73 | view |
| 2021-04-18 | Varsha Thakur | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...oronto or any activities as such. Plus, Ive checked the weather forecast, please ad...
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Line 9, column 78, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...verything to eat there as you know that Im a food buff. From authentic street food...
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Line 9, column 223, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
... you to accompany me everywhere because Im only coming for a weeks time. Lookin...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ' the Warmest'.
Suggestion: The Warmest
... Looking forward to seeing you soon Warmest regards, Rahul.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, then, another thing, as to, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53333333333 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40867772752 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661111111111 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8340350807 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232058079675 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090473592046 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569691448013 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136776464325 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0601181407912 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.