A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Sam,
Hope you and your family are doing great.I still remember the good time we spent together during your last visit to India.I am writing this letter to inform that me and my family got visa to visit Canada next month.Thank you for inviting us.We are thrilled as we have never been there.As this will be my first visit in your country, I would like to know about few things.
I would like to buy gifts for your family members. Please help me with their preferred choice so that I can buy them accordingly.Also I want to know about what are the activities which kids can enjoy the most as they are of age 4 and 8.We are carrying regular clothes,sweater,woolen clothes and jackets.Anything else do we need to carry?Please let me know in advance as I have to book tickets and begin preparation for the same.
We are vegetarian so would like to know which restaurants serve good vegetarian cusine?We are carrying dry snacks,cereals,milk,milk powder along with us during travel.
Looking froward to meet you soon.
Kind Regards,
Mark Watts
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...roward to meet you soon. Kind Regards, Mark Watts
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...t you soon. Kind Regards, Mark Watts
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, first, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8021978022 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16920104847 2.54303337028 125% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.637362637363 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 16.3608247423 183% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.109719212 44.8134815571 344% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.666666667 76.5299724578 190% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.3333333333 16.8248392259 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 2.54639175258 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194479551036 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.09191760728 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0947550795482 0.0603063233224 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116033876389 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100328466357 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 8.37731958763 195% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 8.54432989691 164% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 8.15463917526 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.