A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Dear Jack,
I am writing to say that I agree to visit Canada the next month, but I have never been to it. I would, therefore, like to ask some information relating to the country prior to my departure.
I need a few details on what your parents have preference to. I am concerned of what to bring to them as a present, because I am unaware of what is in popularity in your homeland. I want to purchase local souvenirs, for example, a furry camel, chess and books describing Karaganda city. It would, hence, be nice, if you help me with it. It would be useful to know what type of clothes to include in my luggage. Unfortunately, I can easily get illness, such as flu and a cold, if I do not wear inappropriate outfit. I would be grateful, if you inform me regarding to usual garment in Toronto.
Finally, I am willing to learn about traditional cousin in your region. I have already heard that the food in your motherland is considerably different from that in Kazakhstan. It is important to me, since I have an allergy to milk-made dishes, that may either hurt or kill me.
I am looking forward to your reply as soon as possible, as it is necessary for me to make some preparations before my flight. You can either send me your response to my email address “tolikxxx@mail.ru” or call me on the following number “87001444413”.
Best wishes,
Tolegen
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- Some people think that sports involving violence such as boxing and martial art should be banned from TV as well as from international sporting competitions To what extent do you agree 92
- The younger generation is mainly responsible for latest technological developments How far do you agree 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...the country prior to my departure. I need a few details on what your parents...
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Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n what your parents have preference to. I am concerned of what to bring to them a...
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Line 9, column 181, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...what is in popularity in your homeland. I want to purchase local souvenirs, for e...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, hence, if, look, may, regarding, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1150.0 937.175257732 123% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65587044534 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.34738252349 2.54303337028 132% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.6328799386 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6666666667 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46666666667 4.34317383033 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165021758236 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512931901301 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376695875957 0.0603063233224 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945850420564 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0149241123447 0.0580467560999 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.