A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/she has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
describe some possible disadvantages
say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear Sara,
Hope this letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits, I am writing this letter to you cause you asked me for some advice related to your camping holiday. I have been in lots of camping journeys before so I think it would be a great experience for you as well. You can enjoy many different new things and adventures during this holiday.
There is a lake near our city which is a beautiful place for camping and, I really recommend it to you. Although you would have a perfect time there, you need to consider some things cause I know you have some allergies. There are some insects there that you need to be careful about them and make sure to not forget to use the insect repellent spray before camping. Because if you forget to use it you will have a hard time after a great holiday.
It would be great if I can come with you because it is long time that we can't see each other. Also, I can show you around and we can do some fishing there as well.
Hoping hearing from you and see you soon
Yours with love,
Aida
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 291, Rule ID: NUMEROUS_DIFFERENT[1]
Message: Use simply 'many'.
Suggestion: many
...perience for you as well. You can enjoy many different new things and adventures during this h...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ith you because it is long time that we cant see each other. Also, I can show you ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 4.92783505155 203% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 202.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.23762376238 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02718994392 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559405940594 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.0321281112 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27719902225 0.216113520407 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112375774382 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876444196399 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148099392999 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131084026724 0.0580467560999 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.