A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
describe some possible disadvantages
say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.
Dear Abhishek,
I am writing this letter in regards that you are asking for my opinion before going to summer camping. I hope you are very excited because it is your first summer camp post migration in Canada. It would be mesmerizing experience for you since camping is pleasure activity and you might get chance to interact with other people culture as well as you will see beautiful stars in the sky.
On the other hand, you may face some usual problems during the camp. First and foremost, you are not habitual to sleep in open area, so pack your sleeping bed, also do not forget to take sleeping flap. Secondly, forest is the homeland for multiple insects, to cite an example, mosquitoes, butterflies, bees, honeybees. To avoid bite from mosquito, you should carry the insect’s prevention cream, in addition to this, do for forget to take first aid box with you.
I also want to join you in camping but owing to busy schedule, it would not be possible to drop the inline project which I need to complete next week. But in future we will plan the camping together.
Enjoy your summer camping and write the experience letter.
Yours Sincerely,
Kuldip Kumar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...etter. Yours Sincerely, Kuldip Kumar
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, in addition, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38596111819 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656862745098 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6184907484 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3636363636 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5454545455 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 4.34317383033 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.33538749814 0.216113520407 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136890807202 0.0766984524023 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102538458414 0.0603063233224 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229531477759 0.12726935374 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123058246791 0.0580467560999 212% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.