A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He/She has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
describe some possible disadvantages
say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer
Dear to my best friend, I got information that you will take a camping holidays at this summer. This letter I will inform to you about advantages of camping holidays. Some experience of my camping holiday was at a years ago in forest which nearby city. That place was amazing because there are waterfall, so I did not bring too much water and at the night I can see a sky that lot of stars was lightning.
But some demerit you will face it, for instance when sleeping you need more mattress or blanket because the weather is cold. The other issue is you can not burn wood it is due prevent a wildfire or provoke bears, so the best way when cooking is use a bottle gas.
Consider my busy time, I will take part to go camping with you if all of my homework and duties are complete. You will receive my letter seven days before you go.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 213, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a year' or simply 'years'?
Suggestion: a year; years
...experience of my camping holiday was at a years ago in forest which nearby city. That p...
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Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'waterfalls'?
Suggestion: waterfalls
...hat place was amazing because there are waterfall, so I did not bring too much water and ...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 26.3917525773 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 160.0 206.0 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.25625 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22063300379 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.65 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 216.0 290.88556701 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.6521622484 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 4.34317383033 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170996105076 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861800264403 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586511492739 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108249771255 0.12726935374 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417726568133 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.43 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.