A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice.
Write a letter to your friend.In your letter
explain why you think your friend would enjoy a camping holiday
describe some possible disadvantages
say whether you would like to go camping with your friend this summer.
Dear Gaurav
I hope this letter finds you in good health and I am glad you are planning to go for camping and you are seeking my thoughts on this.
As we are friends from childhood, I can say you would definitely enjoy a camping vacation. Due to our similar passion and hobbies for outdoors and nature, I believe you will relish this trip during summers, additionally you will get lot of sunlight.
However, you need to take care of few things along with enjoyment, for instance there will be mosquitoes as it will be suburbs. They can create lot of trouble like malaria, dengue, therefore take mosquito repellent creams with you. You need to be careful with water what you are drinking, as contaminated water can cause lots of stomach related issues, for instance cholera, loose motions, typhoid.
Please let me know the location, durations and dates of the camping holiday. If I am available during that time, I would like to join you on this expedition, as we both can have a really good time together.
Yours Lovingly
Niharika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Gaurav I hope this letter finds you in good hea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, really, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77900552486 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51856147799 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651933701657 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 42.8151352032 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1111111111 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2206886161 0.216113520407 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962682528356 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626521535678 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120508712437 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0456716961097 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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