Dear John,
I have not seen you for a long time. I hope you are doing well. I heard that you are thinking about the same program like mechanical engineering, which I did it before 2 years ago.
Hence, I would like to give you a brief detail of course relevant and university. The course is running many of university, but the top university in our province is Bangkok University. It is high value and demanded in the current market and course is 3 years long-term program with including practical & theory in classroom training. There is a top level educated teachers working and increase educational & practical skill together in the university. I would recommendation this university because get a job easily after the finish the course. The employer’s come on last term and select many students for working their company. The Application process is very easy through online, you should have minimum requirement 12th science mark sheet with distinction class and pass the general entrance exam.
Please feel free to contact me should you need any further information.
Best wishes,
Samit
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 65, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...a long time. I hope you are doing well. I heard that you are thinking about the s...
^
Line 10, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther information. Best wishes, Samit
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, well, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 925.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11049723757 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79290039805 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696132596685 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.491378456 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.0833333333 76.5299724578 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17867972993 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602369370647 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446229911982 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113741091721 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582784797623 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 8.71597938144 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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