The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where rel

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The graph below shows changes in the share of vehicle registrations of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US between 1970 and 2010.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the proportion of vehicle registration of the three most common types of commercial vehicles in the US in the period of 1970 to 2010.

It is clear that the graph shows significant changes of the proportion during each stage.

In the first stage, from 1970 to 1980, the growth of taxi had increasing rapidly from about 22% to 36%, while the growth of bus also increased significantly by 9%. However, the registration of truck had a big degradation from 49% down to 30%.

In the second stage, from 1980 to 2000, the proportion of truck rose to 45%, while the proportion of bus fell by 12%. After a big degradation between 1980 and 2000, the proportion of taxi rose rapidly to 45%.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, second, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 32.9175257732 9% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 576.0 937.175257732 61% => OK
No of words: 125.0 206.0 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.608 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.34370152488 3.78020617076 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65192458415 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 66.0 127.690721649 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528 0.622605031667 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 155.7 290.88556701 54% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.96699687 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 16.8248392259 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 4.34317383033 165% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193372055528 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118658712173 0.0766984524023 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.185819221467 0.0603063233224 308% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169580936559 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.209519155231 0.0580467560999 361% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.78 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 17.0 41.2886597938 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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