A healthy person is often described as someone who has a good diet, gets a lot of excercise and avoid stress.
What do people do to stay healthy in your country?
Health is wealth. There is a believe that a human who gets all the nutrition, doing daily workout and get rid of his anxiety by any means fits as a flea. In this essay, I’ll explain all the work that has been done by my national people to stay in pink.
First of all, in the morning, the men go for pray than go to their area park and garden where children & woman are already present. The older people prefer to do light exercises like brisk walking but the adult people want to do hard or physically tough exercises somewhat weight lifting, squatting, push-ups etc. Children always playing around with their toys or with the games that park council already placed for them. Girls like swings where younger boys are good at swimming or wrestling.
Secondly, the meal they are having are full of nutrition for example, yogurt, eggs, milk, butter, bread, almonds and nuts in the breakfast to start a healthy day. But, nowadays, junk food is very handy and younger ones like it a lot that is harming the health situation of so many people in my country. People seem to give advice on healthy eating out not recommending their-self in, still these habits are not adopted by the people except one third population
A stressful environment in every office can be seen for instance, deadlines for shipments has to be met in time, sales workers has to achieve their targets and so on but some people are keen to get away all their worries by doing some yoga or meditation or spending time with their family members.
In the nutshell, people are taking care their health with nutritious food and mind relaxing exercise to cope with their anxiety and also some physical exercise to get going with their healthy body.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 28, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
Health is wealth. There is a believe that a human who gets all the nutrition...
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Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
Health is wealth. There is a believe that a human who gets all the nutrition...
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Line 4, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t to start a healthy day. But, nowadays, junk food is very handy and younger ones...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, third, as to, for example, for instance, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 26.3917525773 163% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 937.175257732 151% => OK
No of words: 303.0 206.0 147% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67326732673 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26689371894 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 127.690721649 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620462046205 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 290.88556701 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.417929464 44.8134815571 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.727272727 76.5299724578 168% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5454545455 16.8248392259 164% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.45454545455 4.34317383033 218% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17663298198 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0579668804195 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474682989957 0.0603063233224 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094942875351 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251891211504 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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