Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to bring your attention to our town's college building which is one of the historical monuments. It represents the symbol of our historic tradition and culture of our country. Moreover, it's the only college inaugurated by our first prime minister of our country.
As the college building has not gone through any maintenance for the last decade, it is now in devastating condition. Even though, the pillars are strong enough still we can see fissures on the walls and roof of the building. Although the exteriors of the building reflect the beauty of our culture, the interior designs have deteriorated because the paint on the walls had fainted.
This is the only college in our town, as a result, it always will be crowded with pupils and tutors. So, I would request you to take immediate action on renovating the whole interior of the building before any catastrophic incidents may occur in the college.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...n and culture of our country. Moreover, its the only college inaugurated by our fir...
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Line 7, column 55, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[7]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put between 'will' and 'be'.
Suggestion: will always be
...ly college in our town, as a result, it always will be crowded with pupils and tutors. So, I w...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, look, may, moreover, so, still, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 173.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66931884995 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658959537572 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5482428719 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136073375839 0.216113520407 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521398543167 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055220119986 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0597827657686 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392219908055 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 8.71597938144 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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