hotel disappointment

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hotel disappointment

Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my utter disappointment with your hotel and the way your staff is ruining your repute.
A week ago, my company named ways software, used one of your conference room for executive meeting session. The agenda of the meeting was to obtain modern technological assets and it was joined online by some of our office bearers and agent currently residing in UAE. We were faced a ton of problems during the meeting. Internet connectivity was one of them. We immediately contacted the main office, requesting a redressal of our grievance but the rude act of manger had shaken my belief in your ability to provide top-notch customer care all the time. He was stick to his point that we paid only for the room,
not for cyber facilities. This unprofessional attitude created an unpleasant scene. Under the given state of affairs obsequiously request you to kindly conduct our inquiry in this regard and take the strict step to avoid such unfortunate happening in the future.
I hope that you will deal with this matter promptly as it is causing me considerably inconvenienced.
You’re faithfully
M.IRFAN.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 611, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...is point that we paid only for the room, not for cyber facilities. This unprofess...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97409326425 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86257121157 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709844559585 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.252699213 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2727272727 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5454545455 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.27272727273 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0660601033656 0.216113520407 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0186673927331 0.0766984524023 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590314790136 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.042893388852 0.12726935374 34% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085786777704 0.0580467560999 148% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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