How to make a good first impression on classmate
people always think that begin a new relationship with a stranger in educational environment is a challenge, but there are lots of simple ways to make a great impression in the first time you meet a classmate. The first thing that I think is useful for you is you can introduce yourself, and start a short talk with someone you want to be friends with. To do it, you must have confidence. Besides, if you want your conversation to be more interesting, you need to seek a few topics that are funny for people. Another thing I want to suggest for you is to express your honest opinion and your respect for them. if the classmate is talking, you should make eye contact with him or her. specially, do not look at around at that time, because this action can makes them willing renounce the conversation. On the other hand, also, you should not interrupt someone, but you must concentrate on the things that they are saying. Accordingly, your friend is a special present which God gave you, so you need make a great feeling to start a rapport if you can.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
people always think that begin a new relations...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...nest opinion and your respect for them. if the classmate is talking, you should ma...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Specially
...hould make eye contact with him or her. specially, do not look at around at that time, be...
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Line 1, column 756, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
...d at that time, because this action can makes them willing renounce the conversation....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, another thing, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 862.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48958333333 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59794569451 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604166666667 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9413884416 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5555555556 4.34317383033 243% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101043182151 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0494047707633 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594903649171 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101043182151 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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