IELTS General Training - Writing Task 1
Work is being done on the street where you live. The noise is disturbing you.
Write a letter of complaint to your local council. In your letter,
A)Introduce yourself,
B)Explain what the problem is,
C)Suggest solutions to the problem
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir, Madam
By way of introduction, my name is Aida Serikova and I live in house 4 in Kenesary Street. I bought this flat, because I was attracted by its location in a pristine and residential street. Yet my positive living experience didn't last long.
I am writing to complaint about the constant noise coming from the construction work on the parallel street. It seems the work is carried out 24 hours. I have a small baby who is not able to fall asleep due to the load construction noise at night. Lack of sleep stresses the whole family out. I'm sure there are other families affected by the noise.
Can you please speak with the company and agree on the timing for major work to be carried out. Particularly, no construction from 8pm to 9am. If required, I am ready to represent the voice of other families in the discussion. If you do not take this forward to resolve, I will have to raise my concern with the local authorities including the police.
We may not need to escalate the issue as I have full confidence that you will take care of the complaint and do everything what's required to resolve the situation.
I look forward to hearing a positive response from you soon.
Regards,
Aida
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 224, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...reet. Yet my positive living experience didnt last long. I am writing to complaint...
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Line 5, column 294, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...of sleep stresses the whole family out. Im sure there are other families affected ...
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Line 9, column 124, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...care of the complaint and do everything whats required to resolve the situation. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1004.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60550458716 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65652970462 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623853211009 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.7359245282 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7142857143 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.21428571429 4.34317383033 28% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13489664031 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356883830346 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0386566736104 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0696093167574 0.12726935374 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00841847345079 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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