laptop is not working write a letter to laptop shop

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'becomes'?
Suggestion: becomes
...hop. The laptop is of xyz brand and it become very slow and even hangs a lot. ...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...come very slow and even hangs a lot. As its end of financial year I have to c...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...come very slow and even hangs a lot. As its end of financial year I have to com...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun audit seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of audits'.
Suggestion: a lot of audits
...nd of financial year I have to complete a lot of audit work. I work from home and hence cant ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 28, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...audit work. I work from home and hence cant access any other devices for work. slow...
^^^^
Line 6, column 67, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Slowness
...cant access any other devices for work. slowness of laptop is giving a lot of trouble an...
^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 84, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...op as I am overwhelmed with my work and cant come personally. Please ask your techn...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, look, so, to start with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 591.0 937.175257732 63% => OK
No of words: 132.0 206.0 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47727272727 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.38956122427 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5698126582 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 127.690721649 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 176.4 290.88556701 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8792312917 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293794231005 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958846591443 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0908419570992 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110492315055 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100463705006 0.0580467560999 173% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.82 8.71597938144 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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