you recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. you think he/she should get a job.
Dear Ana,
I am glad that you seek my advice for your future planning. In my opinion you should find job as I remember that you discussed about your poor financial condition from last few yeas. It will very difficult for you to pay huge amount of money for any education.
Apart from that I think these days college are not so important as teenagers just pass their time bunking classes and roaming around in the campus. you will not enjoy nor will be benefited as I know you are a sincere student. I become very easy to get a job even without a college study degree. If you have a suitable talent for a particular job and if start doing a job, it will support you financially also. You will get experience in very early stage of life.
you are a good singer and also able to play a guitar. Many restaurants offer jobs for live performance of music in evenings. So you can find one like this and also there are many concerts performed in different places you can join one.
In future you can increase more talent. I have few contacts of such bands and restaurants. I will shortly send you the details. If you are interested to contact hem and try your luck.
We can discuss more by meeting personally this weekend. Do reply me about your decision.
Yours Loving
Dextor
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ana, I am glad that you seek my advice for yo...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uge amount of money for any education. Apart from that I think these days colle...
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Line 4, column 107, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
... Apart from that I think these days college are not so important as teenage...
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Line 4, column 224, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...asses and roaming around in the campus. you will not enjoy nor will be benefited as...
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Line 4, column 480, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... a job, it will support you financially also. You will get experience in very early ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...xperience in very early stage of life. you are a good singer and also able to p...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... you are a good singer and also able to play...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in different places you can join one. In future you can increase more talent. ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sted to contact hem and try your luck. We can discuss more by meeting personall...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... Do reply me about your decision. Yours Loving ...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Yours Loving Dextor
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, apart from, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 4.92783505155 223% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1048.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45957446809 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37455196984 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621276595745 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.9420897058 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.2222222222 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.0555555556 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.29896907216 163% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34306585069 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101178597064 0.0766984524023 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679263198371 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123143730683 0.12726935374 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1143474485 0.0580467560999 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.7 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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