Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear karan,
How are you guys?i hope you both are doing well, before any other thing thanks a lot for made my holidays perfect we enjoyed so much during those holidays i want some pictures if u can share with me that we clicked togther.our photo always will be act long-lasting to rejuvenate ourselves.
Unfortunately,i was unable to write this letter because of some serious conditions in my house.actually,last week my mother got a major injury in her foot as she became victim of an accident because of her sCooty and bike collision.
Why not you both visit me on next week you know very well that my birthday would be in next month on friday and i planned to throw a party guys ,if u both visit my house we can enjoy a lot with each other and make gossips with my family also.
I hope both of you definitely join me on my birthday.
Lovingly,
ABC
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear karan, How are you guys?i hope you both are doi...
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Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
Dear karan, How are you guys?i hope you both are doing well, before an...
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Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e enjoyed so much during those holidays i want some pictures if u can share with ...
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Line 4, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , i
... rejuvenate ourselves. Unfortunately,i was unable to write this letter because...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rejuvenate ourselves. Unfortunately,i was unable to write this letter because...
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Line 4, column 104, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , last
... serious conditions in my house.actually,last week my mother got a major injury in he...
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Line 5, column 113, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ay would be in next month on friday and i planned to throw a party guys ,if u bot...
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Line 5, column 144, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...iday and i planned to throw a party guys ,if u both visit my house we can enjoy a ...
^^
Line 5, column 238, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...h other and make gossips with my family also. I hope both of you definitely join m...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tely join me on my birthday. Lovingly, ABC
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 702.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.44303797468 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68157319537 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683544303797 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 12.6804123711 32% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 16.3608247423 238% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.512994851 44.8134815571 253% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 175.5 76.5299724578 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 39.5 16.8248392259 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.5 4.34317383033 219% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206972893157 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962614208956 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.077523332692 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121602107871 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0700549490685 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.2 8.37731958763 229% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.1 7.45979381443 216% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.6 8.54432989691 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 8.15463917526 221% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.