Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:• thank them for the photos and for the holiday• explain why you didn't w

Hi Folks,

I believe everyone is doing well and my words will bring you cheerfulness. I would like to thank each and every one of you that last week I had a tremendous outing with you all. Today morning I have received your letter with a bunch of photos which we took at the Niagara falls. All photos are clear and unforgettable especially the picture who taken by John is excellent.
I thought to write the acknowledgment letter after landing in my country. Unfortunately, I had stuck with the work that I need to deliver it immediately on that week so I couldn't acknowledge it quickly and apologize for that.
Moreover, there is the biggest festival in Washington D.C is going to happen next month. The place where I am living is notorious for black Friday celebration. People tend to celebrate the events spectacularly. So I would like to invite everyone to participate in those events and enjoy every moment happily.
In addition, don't worry about dwelling, I can arrange everything which is essential for your stay and also I will organize the transportation facility which would really helpful for you to make comfortable wandering all over the place. I looking forward to receiving a reply from you.

Yours lovingly
Abc

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 98, Rule ID: EACH_AND_EVERY[1]
Message: Consider using 'each one'.
Suggestion: each one
...you cheerfulness. I would like to thank each and every one of you that last week I had a tremendou...
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Line 3, column 179, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this morning' is used.
Suggestion: This morning
...I had a tremendous outing with you all. Today morning I have received your letter with a bunc...
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Line 4, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...eliver it immediately on that week so I couldnt acknowledge it quickly and apologize fo...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: C
...is the biggest festival in Washington D.C is going to happen next month. The plac...
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Line 6, column 14, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...oy every moment happily. In addition, dont worry about dwelling, I can arrange eve...
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Line 6, column 237, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...mfortable wandering all over the place. I looking forward to receiving a reply fr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, really, so, well, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8672985782 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90189074215 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658767772512 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1504336629 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2307692308 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283425489499 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810760509209 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624191280064 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139083543029 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870640067958 0.0580467560999 150% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.