last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday. Write a letter to your friends. In your letter
1) thank them for the photos and for the holiday.
2) explain why you didn't write earlier.
3) invite them to come and stay with you.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding the item i have have " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">orderd from your online store;Please allow me to explain.
I have been a satisfied customer of yours for over a year. But recently, I ordered a Juicer Blender from your online store and when i received the product it it " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">was damaged from the side.I was was " style="color: rgb(51, 51, 51); font-size: 19.36px; white-space: pre-wrap; background-color: rgb(255, 255, 255);">completly shocked as I was expecting proper wrapping of the product with pads on side.But it was not even covered properly.
Since, I have not received the desired product as its a clear negligence from your side.I donot believe I should be charged for this product.I want full refund of all the money both the shipping cost and the product cost or either fix the damage for free.The product code is E4567b6.
I want to you arrange a courier to get this product from me.If you want to book a time to send the courier at my home, you can contact me at this email address.
I look forwad to hearing from you at he earliest.
regards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: have
...my dissatisfaction regarding the item i have have ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Line 3, column 82, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'had'.
Suggestion: had
...ssatisfaction regarding the item i have have ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Line 7, column 133, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Blender from your online store and when i received the product it it ' style...
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Suggestion: I
...255;'>was damaged from the side.I was was ' style='color: rgb51...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: was
...5;'>was damaged from the side.I was was ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Line 7, column 323, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...pos;>was damaged from the side.I was was ' style='color: rgb51, 51, 51...
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Suggestion: But
...apping of the product with pads on side.But it was not even covered properly. ...
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Suggestion:
...e.But it was not even covered properly. Since, I have not received the desired p...
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ave not received the desired product as its a clear negligence from your side.I don...
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...ve I should be charged for this product.I want full refund of all the money both ...
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Suggestion: The
... cost or either fix the damage for free.The product code is E4567b6. I want to...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Regards
...o hearing from you at he earliest. regards
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, regarding
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44239631336 4.54256449028 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.73266200105 2.54303337028 147% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552995391705 0.622605031667 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 16.3608247423 220% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 161.258591502 44.8134815571 360% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 196.833333333 76.5299724578 257% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 36.1666666667 16.8248392259 215% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118002180529 0.216113520407 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870953389052 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.041861929446 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.08038871554 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0263616963416 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 8.37731958763 266% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.86 70.7449484536 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 8.71597938144 170% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.4 8.54432989691 192% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.