Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with a friend. He have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
- thank them for the photos and for the holiday
- explain why you didn't write earlier
- invite him/her to come and stay with you
Dear Friend,
I'm writing to thank you for the great time we've spent it together during our last holiday in Europe. it was my pleasure to sleepover some days at your apartment, I would thank you for your hospitality and generosity.
As you remember, we had several nice tours in many ancient places and cities, we captured wonderful photos from different angles, they look so amazing, thanks for your cleverness in shooting such pictures and for sending them quickly to my email. Each time I look over them with my friend or family I remember each moment, all were astonished with such images.
Sorry for not writing earlier, I had difficult times at work from the first day I'm back. Addition to my grandpa incident, till today he's still at the hospital due to a car accident.
However, I would like to accept my invitation to come and stay with me this upcoming summer. we will plan for our safari journeys and the activities that we will do during this vacation.
Thank you again for the great time we spent and waiting your acceptance on my invitation.
Sincerely Yours,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Suggestion: I'm
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Suggestion: we've
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Suggestion: It
...ther during our last holiday in Europe. it was my pleasure to sleepover some days ...
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...ficult times at work from the first day Im back. Addition to my grandpa incident, ...
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...tion to my grandpa incident, till today hes still at the hospital due to a car acci...
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Suggestion: We
... and stay with me this upcoming summer. we will plan for our safari journeys and t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77248677249 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46160858197 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650793650794 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.967490214 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 76.5299724578 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.88888888889 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309703898778 0.216113520407 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1134161547 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0988468639131 0.0603063233224 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168571402876 0.12726935374 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109638716136 0.0580467560999 189% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 8.37731958763 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.