Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn't write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any address.
Dear canadian airline Service,
my name is Emil jukovski and last Wednesday I flew from London to vancouver by the night fly at 11 pm of canadian airlines. my Identification number is 10111111 and my flight number was CAN22022.
I was very surprised, and to be honest a bit shocked, when I arrived home and suddenly discovered that I had left my hand luggage on the plane. I remember this because when I had caught the taxi at the airport of Vancouver I was only with my big plane luggage and without the hand luggage at all.
my hand luggage looks like a small-medium troll on 4 stainless steel wheels, black color with a Canadian flag in the middle of the troll, and in addition on the corner it was a small logo of the manufacture company of this troll. The troll was not from the soft material, it looks like Carbon hard bag.
this luggage is very important for me, because it contains a very expensive things like my laptop, my mobile phone, a very interesting book and in particular it contains my personal documents.
Please assist me in this situation.
Thanks in advance!
Best Regards,
Emil jukovski
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear canadian airline Service, my name i...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ight fly at 11 pm of canadian airlines. my Identification number is 10111111 and m...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...d without the hand luggage at all. my hand luggage looks like a small-medium ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...erial, it looks like Carbon hard bag. this luggage is very important for me, becau...
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Line 29, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ance! Best Regards, Emil jukovski
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 952.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78391959799 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63851158616 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572864321608 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.7320780908 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.777777778 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 4.34317383033 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0265269357469 0.216113520407 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0117128793638 0.0766984524023 15% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00950185940946 0.0603063233224 16% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0101893089109 0.12726935374 8% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00891331675686 0.0580467560999 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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