Last month you had a holiday overseas where you stayed with some friends. They have just sent you some photos of your holiday.
Write a letter to your friends. In your letter:
• thank them for the photos and for the holiday
• explain why you didn’t write earlier
• invite them to come and stay with you
DEAR TOM,
HELLO, HOW ARE YOU? I REACHED BACK TO MY PLACE SAFELY AND HAVE RECEIVED YOUR LETTER ALONGWITH THE LOVELY PICTURES. I AM SO GRATEFUL TO YOU FOR INVITING ME FOR THIS TRIP. THIS WAS ONE OF THE MEMORABLE TRIPS I HAVE EVER HAD. THE PICTURES JUST REVOKE ME ABOUT THE GALA TIME THAT WE HAD TOGETHER. THANK YOU FOR SENDING THIS BUNDLE OF JOY.
I AM SORRY FOR REPLYING AFTER SUCH A LONG TIME. MY MOTHER HAD MET THROUGH AN ACCIDENT, ON THE DAY I CAME BACK HOME. THEREFORE, I HAD TO RUSH TO THE HOSPITAL TO CHECK ON HER. HER LEFT LEG HAS BEEN FRACTURED AND HAS BEEN ADVICED TO TAKE REST FOR TWO WEEKS. YOU NEED NOT WORRY AS SHE IS RECOVERING NOW.
THE OTHER DAY, I WAS NARRATING ABOUT MY VISIT TO YOUR PLACE TO MY MOTHER. SURPRISINGLY, SHE SUGGESTED ME TO ASK YOU TO COME OVER HERE FOR CHRISTMAS. I THINK THAT IS A GREAT IDEA. WE HAVE THIS TRADITION TO CELEBRATE THE FESTIVAL WITH OUR CLOSED ONES. I GUESS EVEN YOU WILL ENJOY TO WITNESS THIS PLACE. SO, DO MAKE YOUR PLANS ACCORDINGLY AND LET ME KNOW SOON. HOPING TO SEE YOU SOON.
YOURS LOVINGLY.
RAJ
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
DEAR TOM, HELLO, HOW ARE YOU? I REACHED BACK TO MY...
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Line 7, column 228, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...THIS TRADITION TO CELEBRATE THE FESTIVAL WITH OUR CLOSED ONES. I GUESS EVEN YOU W...
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Line 11, column 4, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...O SEE YOU SOON. YOURS LOVINGLY. RAJ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, so, therefore, i guess, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.26108374384 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25138782051 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655172413793 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.0811373573 44.8134815571 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.0555555556 76.5299724578 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2777777778 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 4.34317383033 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269834962657 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082105407208 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541460492622 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177042107801 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0659938339779 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.3 8.37731958763 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.69 70.7449484536 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.0 7.45979381443 54% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.24 8.71597938144 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 4.0 8.15463917526 49% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.