Dear Leena,
How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. Although it's not been a long time to see, it still feels much longer.
Thanks for a memorable holiday and magnificent photos that you couriered. It brought it back to me so vividly. Staying with you in your place and exploring new places was an adventure and eye-opener for me. Mumbai is an indeed a scenic city with remarkable landslides and wildlife, particularly the north side where you stay.
Sorry for not writing you back after the return. As soon as I arrived here, my mother became sick, and we had to admit her in a hospital. She seems to be improving now and hopefully will be back to normal soon.
Next month, we are celebrating our parents 25 marriage anniversary. Therefore, I'd like to invite you for a function and we'd be delighted if you could make it out.No doubt, you will stay with us. Let me know your flight timings and date, I'll pick you up from an airport.
Take care and write back soon.
Anshu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Leena, How are you? I hope this letter finds yo...
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Line 7, column 212, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hopefully will be back to normal soon. Next month, we are celebrating our paren...
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Line 9, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...nts 25 marriage anniversary. Therefore, Id like to invite you for a function and w...
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Line 9, column 163, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: No
...d be delighted if you could make it out.No doubt, you will stay with us. Let me kn...
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Line 9, column 238, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...t me know your flight timings and date, Ill pick you up from an airport. Take ...
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Line 9, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... date, Ill pick you up from an airport. Take care and write back soon. An...
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Line 11, column 32, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rt. Take care and write back soon. Anshu
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Line 20, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te back soon. Anshu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, still, therefore, well, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41474380718 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.716666666667 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.016067126 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.4285714286 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.8571428571 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.85714285714 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326479574232 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106925353522 0.0766984524023 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0931998656694 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154917699562 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0947616841804 0.0580467560999 163% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.09 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.